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    2 great fanfics...

    I've submitted the finished one to theforce.net and it's been approved. These are 2 stories I've written within one zip file. You'll need winzip to read them. The first one:

    -The first file is "star wars of course", really called "Battle of the Force," is set after the whole Yuuzhan Vong incident. The Sith have created a new Empire. To counter the threat, the New Republic creates an all-Jedi division of the military.

    -The second file is "return of darth tyranus," really called "The Changing Tide...and Closely Guarded Secrets." It's set one year after AOTC. The Separatists build a prototype Death Star and wreak havoc with it...Obi-Wan tracks down Boba Fett...and much more! It's not complete but is coming along nicely.

    If anyone has time to read either of these, be sure to take a moment and post in this thread your thoughts on them...or just PM me. Or both! Thanks.

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    UPDATE:

    I have now completed "return of darth tyranus" the post-AOTC story. Here is the full version. You'll need WinZIP to get it.

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    Nicely done... Your writing skills are maturing. All who read these should be impressed by your work.
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    I'm impressed DeadEye good work! Are there more on the way?

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    Yeah. I've already been working on a new John Rassick tale.

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    i like your fan-fic's, their awsome!
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    Thanks!
    And thank you Pendo, for reviving this thread! Now more forumites are able to enjoy my work!

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    well I just read Return of Darth Tyranus and I must say it's great
    very well written and the story is very good too
    I'll probably read the other story tomorrow
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    Glad you like it.



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    The other one is a huge, original tale. Hundreds of Sith attacking a colony, hell-bent on destruction is just uber-sweet.

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    Originally posted by DeadEye

    The other one is a huge, original tale. Hundreds of Sith attacking a colony, hell-bent on destruction is just uber-sweet.
    This is the one I read and I enjoyed it quite a bit.

    If you might take a small suggestion though DeadEye; you're right that the Sith marching into the colony is a very epic visual, but perhaps you could draw it out a bit more. It feels like it's over extremely fast, when a great scene like that should really draw you into the battle and give you a sense of depth.

    At any rate, I really liked this story as I already told you on PM. Keep it up.
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