maybe you already know, but I just recently found on the net the first version of the script originally wrote by George Lucas for "The Star Wars"!
You can find it in the Guy Lagace site.
I once read the Star Wars script was written in different versions before becoming the saga we know, and now I had the possibility to read it, thanks to aldera.net.
It looks like this script was refused by a lot of movie producers, and I understand why: this version is quite bloody, it seems a Shakesperian tragedy, more than a novel about light and dark side of the force.
But it is very funny to discover the evolution of characters and ideas from this early attempt to the final Star Wars universe.
What do you think?
P.S. An example of what you can find in the script: the first version of "May the force be with you" is "May the force of others be with you". Quite ugly, isn't it?